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Proud to be an X-Nerd chapter 1 . Jul 4, 2007
Ok, that was really interesting, but I'm totally confused.

What in the world is going on? I get that your using a female Batman character. But I don't recognize anyone but Robin. ;)

(name lost) chapter 1 . Mar 12, 2006
Okay, okay, I'll review. As I already said, great story. Are the aliens Lobo's wife was real (DC real, not here real)? I was upset when you killed Lobo - like I said, he's really cool. This story used up an entire afternoon when I was supposed to be doing school. I don't think reading Fan-Fic is a healthy habit.

Snickle-Gigger chapter 11 . Mar 11, 2006
Though I'd reviewed for this chapter already. o.0

Aww...the sweetness of this chapter...it burns...o.0 But it's a good kind of burning, really. :)

Aw...it's the epilogue... grr... ~.~ Ah, well, always more writing to look forward to from you, eh? There'd better be, anyways... _~

Gotta go-my chemistry review calls to me. Ick...

Lata!

trecebo chapter 11 . Mar 9, 2006
Dangit! You made me cry. Again. Lobo is gone. Dude. *sniff*

Kusco chapter 1 . Mar 8, 2006
Well here it is my review of this first chapter! *ducks because it's so late.*

Pretty interesting. The characters interact pretty well it's fun seeing them talk. At the same time it is slightly confusing to keep track of them all and figure out whats going on. Not because you didn't write it well but because there's just a lot of information to take in. I still liked it. I'll have to read more.

Snickle-Gigger chapter 10 . Feb 21, 2006
The family tree...confuzzling, but interesting to see how everyone ties together like that. You should check out my family tree-I have four different pairs of direct grandparents. DON'T ask.

She frowned at him thoughtfully. "You look like #$&."

Sounds like the morning greeting at my house:

Me: Mornin', mom!

Mom: You look like #$&.

Me: Well good morning to you too...mornin', dad!

Dad: Get a job.

Me: Kay...

My parents are rather frightening before they have their coffee. o.0

Lovely chapter.

Lobo, we 'ardly knew yah.

Update!

trecebo chapter 10 . Feb 20, 2006
Ya know, even though you've told me a ba-jillion times who is related to whom and how, it never ceases to amaze me when you start laying it all out. I kinda have David's sense of wonder and belated confusion. His "I've been sort of busy" line was perfect when Narmo teased him.

But the wonder and awe part: sah-WEET!

Snickle-Gigger chapter 9 . Feb 15, 2006
Wow. You were right. It was rather shocking.

o.0

You're good at all of the battle jargon and stuff that comic book people say during fights. I can't pull that of without it sounding cliched. Then again...what comic book comebacks aren't cliched by now? XD.

"In yer dreams, bastich!" Lobo swung his hook and caught his twin in the side. "Nobody frags the Bat unless I say."

Sounds like me at school about my cousin. "Hey, you can't hit him! I'm the only one allowed to hit him!" XD.

Great chapter! Update soon!

trecebo chapter 9 . Feb 12, 2006
Where to start? Lobo clone? Oy vey! Everyone duck! Head to head combat, battling Lobos...blood. It's intense and almost overwhelming.

And...the good Lobo died. :( Man. I hate that.

Love David though. He's in such a good position to be the one needed when the One wants him to be.

Sigh. Must go and cry. Again. Lobo is...gone. *sniff*

JuhFreak chapter 8 . Feb 6, 2006
I think perhaps that Ronnie needs to give the city to God. "Her city" indeed. Oh, those Batpeople! (And, my, that first sentence was very long.)

You may think I've forgotten, but I really DO intend to draw that picture for you someday!

~J'F

trecebo chapter 8 . Feb 3, 2006
Good thing David is well grounded. All those meta peeps dropping in and he could go a bit insane if he weren't. I like the different convos, the almost absentminded chatting while playing with the 'lima bean' was just...elemental in its simplicity. How'd ya like those big words? :D

Anywho, great chappy...it's late.

Snickle-Gigger chapter 8 . Feb 3, 2006
"Narmo...don't. Don't..." She paused to close her eyes and muster her senses. "Don't want your head imbedded in my wall."

"Crud. Didn't think 'a that."

Yes, I've said things like that many a time before in my house. I have a twenty-year-old brother who collects swords, and the lock on my door was busted. You do the math.

I rather liked this chapter. :)

Update soon!

Snickle-Gigger chapter 7 . Feb 3, 2006
I need one a' them stress worms...

trecebo chapter 7 . Dec 22, 2005
Alright! Action, more peeps to keep track of and Lobo on a protective streak. David is feeling left out and Ronnie is on the fritz. Literally. Sheesh. Will the fun never end?

Bwah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-aha! cough hack snort..gag...heh.

trecebo chapter 6 . Dec 8, 2005
Okies, I started this at the prologue and had to read til this point. I must say, that to take the entire gang (sort of) and go far into the future and still be tied in...I bow in your general direction. This is so fascinating. Plus, I have a handy-dandy scorecard just to keep up with who is who and such.

Can't wait for more...

Snickle-Gigger chapter 6 . Nov 6, 2005
Muaha...I really liked this chapter. . Lotsa action, and of course the usual catch-phrases that all villians and heros are allowed to use...lol.

I'd write more, but my brother is practically BREAKING MY ARM RIGHT NOW because he wants the computer.

Update soon!

Ice Lynx chapter 4 . Oct 28, 2005
Again with the w00t!

*shakes head and sighs*

Alas, one more happening and it may be proven to be an epidemic, mien fruend.

:P

Ice Lynx chapter 3 . Oct 28, 2005
*shifty eyes*

I think the soul of Tammy took Clark there for a moment... w00t!

:P :P :P

*waps Clark wit de waffle bat*

Silly boy.

JuhFreak chapter 6 . Oct 27, 2005
This was just... such an interesting chapter! Kudos to Ronnie for doing the responsible thing. And the opening was fun. And the fight was cool, although there were maybe a few too many characters for me to grasp it all. :P Rock on!

Snickle-Gigger chapter 5 . Sep 22, 2005
Long chapter, whew!

"Honorary uncle, right?" David scratched his head. "I've got one like that. My mom had to pull her gun on him to make him get away from the TV after his team lost the Superbowl one time."

Sounds like my own uncle, actually. He's a Steelers fan; the family seems to think that's grounds for disownment. o.0

Dance-Fighting is very strange, but very interesting to look at. At the Cleveland Institute of Art Chalk Festival last weekend there were some rather good people doing that, and we stayed and watched for a while.

Lovely chapter!

Update soon!

JuhFreak chapter 5 . Sep 21, 2005
Your writing style is very precise. Good job. :) I like the dialogue in the first scene, between the two cops. It was cute.

Keep the faith!

Sorry I haven't been around.

Snickle-Gigger chapter 4 . Aug 18, 2005
Heh, happy Mary-Sueing...*chuckles*

Your little "fangirl" had me cracking up. Honestly, that was so funny... . Y'know, I always enjoyed the "Batgirl" comics. My library had a bunch of 'em, strangely enough. o.0

Interesting so far. . I like it!

Snickle-Gigger chapter 1 . Aug 18, 2005
An interesting start. *grin*

*scampers off to read more*

Esther-Channah chapter 3 . Jul 19, 2005
Great chapter. Still waiting to find out what happened to the original Batclan, though!

Esther-Channah chapter 2 . Jul 17, 2005
Hm... OK, so far I've figured out that we're dealing with the next generation (or a later generation). Intriguing enough to make me want to read more of this. Blight bomb? Can't wait for an update! Cheers!

JuhFreak chapter 2 . Jul 15, 2005
O. Blight bomb.

Hahaha. Featuring a guest appearance from... Lobo! By the way, kudos for using the right lingo, like "fragged."

Crit: Three-year-olds mispronounce things a lot, but they can talk in complete sentences. I'd know, I had one obsessed with me for a while... :P

JuhFreak chapter 1 . Jul 13, 2005
Lookit me! I'm reviewing! Yay!

Sorry I haven't been around.

Well, you know I've already read this first part, so... hmm, all I can say is, I wish it were easier to make page breaks on Could you maybe upload the document again, and edit it on the site? I think they have a horizontal rule or something. Not that I use it.

*babbles on incessently*

God bless!

~J'F